2018年11月17日托福考试写作部分详解

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  综合写作

  总论点:2012年发现一具骸骨,是不是Richard III(查理三世)

  阅读:

  1. 遗骸的DNA显示这个人的头发是blond,Richard的画像是brown。

  2. 遗骸的radiocarbon检测与他死时年龄不符合,所以不是Richard。

  3. 遗骸上没有wounds和injuries,而Richard打了很多仗。

  听力:

  1. DNA只能看出青少年期的头发颜色,很多金色头发的人是在后来变成棕色,而且DNA显示是金色,Richard儿时画像也证明他小时候是金色头发。

  2. 遗骸的牙齿测出来生前吃了很多seafood,seafood会影响radiocarbon,体内放射性碳的含量较低,牙齿经过检验的结果表明遗骸比实际要小, 因此死亡时间更晚。

  3. 不是经历过战争就一定受重伤,也可能是皮肤擦伤。Richard可以有best protection,伤不到骨头,所以没有什么伤痕。

  话题分类:考古类

  解题思路:解释听力如何反驳阅读部分。

  参考范文:

  In the reading passage, the author thinks that the remains is not Richard III. On the contrary, in the listening, the professor strongly contradicts with it.

  To begin with, according to the reading passage, the author suggests the DNA of the remains shows that the hair is blond, but the portrait of Richard III is brown. By contrast, the lecturer disagrees with it and thinksDNA can only tell the color of hair in adolescence, and many blondes turn brown later. DNA of the remains shows the hair is blond, and Richard's childhood portraits also proves that he has blond hair when he is little.

  In addition, the reading passage indicates the radiocarbon of the remains is not consistent with the age at which he dies, so it is not Richard. However, the speaker holds the opposite opinionthat the remains’ teeth are found to have eaten a lot of seafood, which can affect radiocarbon. And Test on the teeth shows that the remains is younger.

  Lastly, the writer in the reading part believes there are no wounds and injuries on the remains, but Richard fights many wars. By comparison, the listening material indicates, experience of war does not necessarily lead to serious injuries, but skin abrasions. Richard can have best protection, so the bones can’t be hurt, and there are no scars.

  独立写作

  which do you think is the most important quality to maintain long-lasting friendship?

  1. Friends help each other in a crisis or goes worried in life

  2. Friend have similar interests or views in the topics

  3. Friends trust each other completely

  话题分类:交友类。

  解题思路:

  观点:危机中朋友互相帮助

  理由: 危机中见朋友的真品性并使友谊更加深厚

  驳斥2 :相同爱好很重要带来乐趣,但危机时弃自己而去会伤害彼此友谊,使友谊持续不长

  驳斥3:信任很重要,但完全信任有时会鼓励朋友做些错事,从而伤害友谊

  参考范文:

  The definitionof true friendship varies so largely among individuals. Some may claim thattrue friendship can only be forged by the complete trust or similar interestsas these features not only render the communication smoothly but also bring alot of happiness which make the friendship last longer. However, according tome, it is best to choose a friend who can support me in whatever circumstances.

  The proverb that a friend inneed is a friend indeed is never overemphasized when we make friends. Only inadversity can we know if a person really owns the basic qualities of a truefriend. Since on these occasions, our friend usually need to make an importantdecision from which to what extent they care about us is displayed. If a friendat this crucial moment provides us no help nor even consolation, he cannot becalled a reliable friend which also exerts a bad influence on our latercommunication. There is a great possibility that the friendship will break offsince we don’t want to be hurt any more. In contrary, if they still support us,it can strengthen our relationship.

  Admittedly, it isvery important to enjoy the pleasure and happiness of friendship throughsharing the similar topics and interests with our friends. Spending joyfulhours together with a partner would help us get rid of loneliness and cope withpressure. However, happiness cannot ensure that the friendship will lastforever. Once some conflict or test comes, for example, as the mentioned crisisbefalls on one of our friends and they desert us. We will become very upset asour feelings are ignored at this moment which makes us see the past from atotally different perspective. The joyfulness brought by the congenial talksnow turns out to be an irony to this friendship and the friendship will not beeasy to maintain.

  There is no denyingthat complete trust plays an important role in making friends. Knowing thatwhatever condition we may be in there is always someone standing in behind ofus really gives a sense of contentment and encouragement. However, if we out ofcuriosity or ignorance or caprice do something that not only hurts ourselvesand causes damage to the society, our friends at this time still trust thedecision we make and encourage us to take action. The irreparable damage causedby the careless decision may urge us to see the complete trust in a differentway and makes us doubt this friendship. So friendship built upon the completetrust cannot last longer either.

  All in all, each person may have different view towardfriendship. Though similar interest and complete trust are important, thesefeatures should not be laid too much emphasis. In order to keep the friendshipeverlasting, it is necessary for us to make friends with those who could offerselfless support in time of need.

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